Unavowed
Scattered thoughts, baffled feelings
Was it really so long ago
seemed like just yesterday
Nothings's changed?
(image courtesy: http://blogs.sun.com/factotum/resource/confusion.jpg)
I'm placing my pile of stones here, some are rough, grainy gravel, while some are unsightly cumbersome rocks, but they form my treasure chest...
Arvind said...
ReplyDeleteWow! That image is stunning! Coincidentally, I am reading a book on physics that talks about circular loops in spacetime, which goes very well with both the image and your poem. :-)
Saturday, March 19, 2011 3:25:00 PM
Ardra said...
Thank you Arvind. All the pictures that go with my 'stones' I've googled from the net. I started collecting my stones from Feb. During Feb, the going was strong, and now I'm scouring for pebbles and mud...
Saturday, March 19, 2011 3:55:00 PM
P.R said...
searching Bheekari!
(abt ur images)
:-)
Monday, March 21, 2011 10:15:00 AM
vanderloost said...
Ardra your verses seem as though a part of me. Have you ever tried writing Haikus. You'd be a mighty success I forecast!!!
Sunday, March 27, 2011 8:10:00 AM
Ardra said...
Geetashree, wow! thats a beautiful comment!
Haiku- I really do not know how to go about it...does it have a prescribed format?
Sunday, March 27, 2011 4:53:00 PM